Cheating, Death – chapter 3

Go read Cheating, Death now.

What fun chapter 3 has been!  About 2400 words in a little under 3 hours, and most of it was rock’em sock’em zombie-pocalypse fun to write!  I mean, look at my last few tweets:

“12:30AM – time to start writing again, right? Have I mentioned I love my job & don’t want to lose it? Love, love, love being a creative.” – from about 12:30AM

“Chapter 3 starts out with a bang. 750+ words in 50 minutes isn’t bad, especially if it’s as fun a scene as that.” – from about 1:20AM

“I wonder if I can keep this up for the rest of the book. Another 50mins, another 850+ words of intense zombie awesomeness for Chapter 3.” – from about 2:10AM

And now it’s about 3:15AM and Chapter 3 is live on Smashwords.  Plus the whole thing is still free.  Don’t you want to see what I’m so excited about?

Go read Cheating, Death now.

Cheating, Death – chapter 2

Go read Cheating, Death now.

I’ve just finished writing chapter 2 and posting it to Smashwords.  For the 5 of you who had already downloaded chapter 1, please just grab the most recent copy – you’ll see 3 updates in quick succession; I was just trying to get all the formatting right.  It should only take 1 try for future chapters, I think I’ve got a workflow that will give consistent results.

Did you need a synopsis? It’s only ~4500 words so far, and it’s still completely free; just go read it.  And then tell me what you think.

Go read Cheating, Death now.

Cheating, Death – chapter 1

Go read Cheating, Death now.

Yesterday, I finally started work on my new novel, Cheating, Death.  As I’ve been working toward, as soon as the first chapter was done, I got to work getting it set up on Smashwords.  My idea is to write the book “live” on Smashwords; to make the rough draft available to readers as it unfolds.  The first few chapters will be free, and after a certain point I’ll gradually start increasing the price so that by the time the book is fully written, the eBook will cost full price.  Because of the way Smashwords handles versioning and rights, once you’ve paid for an eBook you have access to it no matter what the price gets updated to or how many times the text is modified – in fact, you actually get to choose which version of the book to download, if it’s been updated since you purchased it.  So whatever price you pay, whenever you purchase it, you don’t have to pay again and you get access to all future updates, including the final one.

I plan to update the book on Smashwords every time I finish a chapter (or if I’m on a roll, at the end of each writing session with any completed chapters).  I expect to finish the book by Halloween at the latest (because NaNoWriMo starts at midnight on Halloween), and perhaps as soon as the end of next week, if the story really flows out.  (One time I wrote a book over a long weekend, so there’s no telling, maybe I’ll be done by Monday.)  Your feedback on the novel-in-progress is appreciated.  Feedback on the content, the grammar, spelling, the unlikable characters, whatever – anything is welcome.  I’d like to get the thing in as good a shape as possible while I’m writing it.

I plan on doing as much of the back-end work as possible while writing it (plus I’ve already got the cover almost finished, and I’ve just put together several pages on modernevil.com for it) so that within a couple of weeks of finishing the first draft, I should have the paperback in hand.  Then, with any luck, I’ll start podcasting the audio version of the novel on November 13th – one week after Untrue Tales… Book Three is finished on the Modern Evil Podcast… which should give me podcast content until around mid-January, 2010.

Continue reading Cheating, Death – chapter 1

story is the music of books

If iTunes store decouples “music” from “albums”, what will future publishers decouple from “books”? What’s the “music” equivalent?” – Kathy Sierra, on Twitter

For tech books, safari already does do some decoupling; I grab just chapters and subsections all the time off of safari” – Matt Bowen, in response

but that’s my question… the word “chapter” (or section) does imply fine-granularity (like “song”), but what’s the “music”?” – Kathy Sierra

The music is the story, for fiction, and the knowledge, for non-fiction.  (Generally.)  It is the part of the “book” that remains the same, regardless of format or edition: Whether you read the story in a hardback or a paperback, from an eReader or an iPhone, have it read to you by a professional storyteller or a friend, and for this analogy even when you watch an adaptation for stage or screen or as a video game (or other interactive entertainment), there is a core thing that remains the same.  Whether you get your information from a technical manual, a lecture, a powerpoint presentation, an instructional video, or direct mentorship, there is a core of knowledge that remains the same.  This is the music, this is the melody, of what books provide.

iTunes is not what decoupled “music” from “albums” – music existed prior to albums, as sheet music and as live performance, at the least.  Even after the advent of the album, the concert experience -unless the live playlist strictly matched the album’s- decoupled music from the confines of the album, often mixing, mashing, and altering the music with every event.  The single separated out a song or two at a time (sometimes several “singles” released over time for each album), but if singles weren’t doing the sort of decoupling you imply iTunes does, then neither does iTunes.  That sounds like more of the job of the device; the record player, the walkman, the iPod, the live performer, which decouples the music from the medium (record, tape, MP3, memory/sheet-music) to deliver it to you.

So now I’m wondering what you meant, rather than pursuing the interesting part of the line of thought, about story:  Did you mean how iTunes delivers music electronically, without a physical container (MP3 vs CD), or did you mean how iTunes allows you to buy individual tracks rather than the groups of tracks known as ‘albums’, or did you mean something else I haven’t understood?  Hrm.  There are plenty of electronic book sales channels out there that deliver the book without need for the physical container, and most of them have stripped away everything but the raw text (current eBook formatting is atrocious), delivering only the story and none of the window dressing (think the big album artwork on a record, and the glossy, embossed dust jacket on a big paperback – it’s not the book, it’s not the album, it’s marketing material).

But then again, there’s this interesting thought about ‘story is to book as music is to album’ that seems very interesting to me…  And the other idea -that Matt brought up- of ‘chapter is to book as song is to album’, and how for some types of writing (poetry, technical manuals) it makes sense for people to want/buy individual tracks/chapters apart from the book as a whole, but then there’s most long-form fiction, and linear and narrative non-fiction, where that doesn’t work.  Do you want just chapter 24 of the latest techno-thriller?  Just the first and the final chapter of a mystery?  Or are you here for the story? Some thoughts:

Voice acting & performance is to audio book as page layout & cover design is to paper book.

A concert is to an album as a reading is to a book.

The easy to use, high-capacity MP3 player with custom playlists and ‘shuffle’ changed the way we, as consumers, take in music.  I see electronic reading (including blogs & RSS aggregators, dedicated eReaders & smart phones, and Twitter & facebook status updates) driving toward shorter and shorter ‘chunks’ of words; often part of a longer narrative, but easily broken into bite-size pieces.  RSS aggregators are like shuffle (and playlists, if you categorize your feeds) for online writing.  Twitter mixes all the conversations of everyone you follow together in the same way – narrative & story have not disappeared, they’ve just been chunked and shuffled.  People are micro-blogging fiction, writing whole novels on Twitter and on facebook pages (and in Japan, novels via SMS, written and read without ever leaving phones), and have you heard of the growth of ‘flash fiction‘?  The alteration of the landscape of story, which is the music a book plays in your mind, has been going on all around you, and it is already decoupled from paper, from ‘book’.  Writers are changing the way they write stories, readers are changing the way they consume stories, (and not just stories, but knowledge as well, as evidenced by most of the feeds being non-fiction, and the success of services like Safari (which Matt mentioned) breaking non-fiction into individually-available chapters and sections) it’s been going on for years, and the paper book isn’t going to die because of it – we’re simply beginning to have a richer, broader landscape that comes to mind when we think of ‘book’.

eBook experiment ending

As you may or may not remember, back near the beginning of June I started an experiment re: eBook pricing. From then until now, all my eBooks have been priced under $2 each.  The reduced pricing ends after today (so if you haven’t grabbed your copy of any of my eBooks, today is the last day to take advantage of these reduced prices)…

There are a couple of reasons for this; the main one being what I’d discussed at the outset of the experiment: I wanted to see whether volume of sales would increase with reduced prices.  I’d even decided that overall sales volume is more important than overall profit, such that if enough copies were selling at the reduced prices to equal (or improve upon) the amount I was earning before the experiment, I’d keep the lower prices.  Sadly, the rate of sales remained about the same at reduced prices as it was at my original pricing.

There’s another important reason, and it relates to some recent news from Smashwords.  Starting soon, all eligible eBooks available through Smashwords (all of mine should be eligible) will also be distributed through Barnes & Noble’s eBook channels (including fictionwise &c.).  This is great news, puts my books in front of even more potential readers, but it does come with an important caveat: sales through the B&N channels will be subject to the normal retail price cut that booksellers demand, so while Smashwords still pays authors 85% of revenue, for sales through the new channels, that’s probably 85% of 50% of list price.  Getting close to the kindle cut there, actually.

Finally, and this isn’t something I’ve already got the answers to, I’m thinking more and more lately about the idea of the value of a book.  Regardless of format & delivery method, whether it’s hardback, paperback, audio CDs, an MP3 CD, a PDF, or a .txt file – the thing in common between all of them is the book itself, the IP.  So, what’s the value of that IP?  What is the value of the book?  I’m not sure, and I’m not sure how a proper conception of the value of the book will alter the pricing landscape of the various editions and formats it’s made available in, but for right now I’m leaning in the direction of a “maintaining the value of the IP” position & I want people to know that the value of the book, the IP at the core of whichever format they’re buying, is more than $2.

So tomorrow I’m going to raise the prices of all my eBooks, on Smashwords and for the kindle, back to their full (1/2 paperback) original prices.  And soon I’m going to put together a video clarifying why I’ll always offer my books for free.