I’ve just finished writing chapter 2 and posting it to Smashwords. For the 5 of you who had already downloaded chapter 1, please just grab the most recent copy – you’ll see 3 updates in quick succession; I was just trying to get all the formatting right. It should only take 1 try for future chapters, I think I’ve got a workflow that will give consistent results.
Did you need a synopsis? It’s only ~4500 words so far, and it’s still completely free; just go read it. And then tell me what you think.