Cheating, Death – chapter 1

Go read Cheating, Death now.

Yesterday, I finally started work on my new novel, Cheating, Death.  As I’ve been working toward, as soon as the first chapter was done, I got to work getting it set up on Smashwords.  My idea is to write the book “live” on Smashwords; to make the rough draft available to readers as it unfolds.  The first few chapters will be free, and after a certain point I’ll gradually start increasing the price so that by the time the book is fully written, the eBook will cost full price.  Because of the way Smashwords handles versioning and rights, once you’ve paid for an eBook you have access to it no matter what the price gets updated to or how many times the text is modified – in fact, you actually get to choose which version of the book to download, if it’s been updated since you purchased it.  So whatever price you pay, whenever you purchase it, you don’t have to pay again and you get access to all future updates, including the final one.

I plan to update the book on Smashwords every time I finish a chapter (or if I’m on a roll, at the end of each writing session with any completed chapters).  I expect to finish the book by Halloween at the latest (because NaNoWriMo starts at midnight on Halloween), and perhaps as soon as the end of next week, if the story really flows out.  (One time I wrote a book over a long weekend, so there’s no telling, maybe I’ll be done by Monday.)  Your feedback on the novel-in-progress is appreciated.  Feedback on the content, the grammar, spelling, the unlikable characters, whatever – anything is welcome.  I’d like to get the thing in as good a shape as possible while I’m writing it.

I plan on doing as much of the back-end work as possible while writing it (plus I’ve already got the cover almost finished, and I’ve just put together several pages on modernevil.com for it) so that within a couple of weeks of finishing the first draft, I should have the paperback in hand.  Then, with any luck, I’ll start podcasting the audio version of the novel on November 13th – one week after Untrue Tales… Book Three is finished on the Modern Evil Podcast… which should give me podcast content until around mid-January, 2010.

Continue reading Cheating, Death – chapter 1

I’m not sure the Olivetti is the right machine for this novel

I’ve just been lying awake in bed, thinking about what to use to write my next novel, Cheating, Death. (Have you seen the cover I designed & painted for it?)  To most people this is sortof a decision between word processors.  Should I use MS Word, Open Office, Pages, or something exciting and hip like WriteRoom or Scrivener?  (Or asking around to find something half as hip as Scrivener for Windows, if that’s what you’re using instead of just getting a Mac already.)  ((Incidentally, stopping to fill in all those links really interrupts the flow of writing this.)) I hadn’t given it much thought, though when someone asked the other day I admitted that I tend either to write directly into InDesign (ie: doing all the publisher-type layout and formatting stuff as I write the first draft, since I’m going to have to get it in there for publishing anyway) or write the first draft on a manual typewriter (though I’ve heard good things about Scrivener, and keep meaning to dl the trial right before I start a new novel).

Anyway, so as I said, I was lying awake in bed a bit ago, thinking about maybe setting up to live stream writing Cheating, Death via USTREAM or some such, thinking about how I’d set up the camera or cameras, maybe see if I could use BoinxTV to do a split-screen with one video of my face and another of my typewriter, how to do lighting, angles, and be able to reach both the typewriter & the computer keyboard to interact with anyone watching and … and for a second it occurred to me that people watching might prefer/expect me to be writing in software and streaming the computer screen itself … but that passed, and I got to thinking about how I’d have to set up another table in front of my computer desk and wondering whether it would take the force of my energetic keystrokes on a manual typewriter…  Which actually led me to thinking about the idea that … I’m not sure the Olivetti is the right machine for writing this novel.

I mean sure, I used my Olivetti TROPICAL (looks like this one) to write the entirety of Forget What You Can’t Remember (among other things), it’s a good machine.  Reliable.  Comfortable.  I’m used to it.  It’s also the lightest and most portable of my working typewriters.  But I don’t think it’s the right machine for Cheating, Death.  This is a zombie novel.  Grittier, dirtier, more painful than FWYCR.  Still not a thriller, no, but the Olivetti is clearly for lighter fare.  So what else could I use?  Certainly not my Olympia!  (She’s a great typewriter, never had a mechanical problem with her, but every word that comes out of her is in script.  Cursive!  Far too feminine for this book.)  Perhaps the Underwood I wrote Dragons’ Truth on, or one of my Smith Coronas or Remingtons.  A friend gave me a President that needs a little work; maybe I could get it in working order… but even though it’s masculine, it has an even smaller profile than my Olivetti.  The President is for more lightweight work.  Maybe I’ll try it for some short stories.  It feels like it would be good at terse writing.

Just writing this post is making me want to go out to the storage room where most of them are sitting, waiting, on shelves, for the chance to be used.  Not all of them are fully functional.  A few of them need totally new ribbons, a couple of them I’ve never written more than a sentence with; I’m not even sure they’d survive a novel without serious repair.  I think my favorite Underwood is about to need a repair I’m not qualified to give it, and I don’t have any money to hire a pro right now.  (Have you considered buying a subscription to me?) I believe (though I recall offering to give one away in the last couple of years, so it may be one less) I currently have nine manual typewriters in my collection.  Each one has a different feel to it, a different character.  I don’t think the Olivetti is the right machine for this novel.  Maybe none of them are; maybe I should write it on my iBook.  I’ll definitely be doing my NaNoWriMo novel on it – I bought that iBook for NaNoWriMo, received it November 1st, 2004, and have been using it ever since… right up until I bought the iMac I’m writing this post on.  I bought that iBook for writing.  Perhaps it’s still the right tool for the job.  Certainly lighter and more portable than even the President.  Perhaps I’ll load it up with Scrivener and take it to town and see what comes out.  But I’m definitely going to get out all my typewriters this weekend & consider the matter thoroughly.

What about you?  What do you write with?  What would you use to write a zombie novel, to write Cheating, Death?

Update: I’ve just uploaded photos of all my typewriters to this flickr set.  I’m thinking about doing a post (or eight) detailing them, as well.

Cover for ‘Cheating, Death’

I’ve just been working on the cover image for my next book, Cheating, Death.  You can see what I’ve come up with, below.  This version of the cover is for the eBook, for now – I haven’t written the cover copy yet, assigned ISBNs, et cetera, but I want to publish this book as it is being written, so I needed a cover before I started writing.  I’m very nearly through with my zombie “research” -which in this case means reading a bunch of zombie books- and expect to start writing it soon.  I’ve actually also been doing a refresher on adultery, since it’s one of the most obvious elements of the book, right after the whole … zombie outbreak thing.

Anyway, your feedback on the cover image is appreciated, if you have any.

Cover image for my upcoming novel, 'Cheating, Death'

Art Fair in N. PHX, 9/12/2009

I’m showing my art & my books this Saturday (tomorrow!) at:

Angel’s Serenity Art Fair
Saturday September 12, 2009, 10:00am – 4:00pm
4839 East Greenway Road (look for Safeway)
Scottsdale AZ, 85254

Please join us!

In addition to myself and other artists, there will be activities for the kids, a free workshop in the back room and a free raffle. The setting is much more relaxed and family friendly than my normal First Friday Art Walk, so you really have a chance to take your time to see everyone’s art, speak to myself (and the other artists) about the art, the books, and more. A few more details:

Free Workshop
Lisa will be providing a free workshop on interpreting your Angel Cards. You’ll find her in Angel’s Serenity’s Backroom from 3:00-3:30pm

Raffles
Stop into Angel’s Serenity and enter to win a Tie Die T-shirt.

Artists
Our artists will include Authors, Painters, Jewelry, Crafts and more!

Activities
There will also have free activity table for the kids including Creating Peace Flags.

Join us!
So, come one out with the whole family and enjoy a day of art, activity and just plain fun!
We hope to see you there!

Thanks!

eBook experiment ending

As you may or may not remember, back near the beginning of June I started an experiment re: eBook pricing. From then until now, all my eBooks have been priced under $2 each.  The reduced pricing ends after today (so if you haven’t grabbed your copy of any of my eBooks, today is the last day to take advantage of these reduced prices)…

There are a couple of reasons for this; the main one being what I’d discussed at the outset of the experiment: I wanted to see whether volume of sales would increase with reduced prices.  I’d even decided that overall sales volume is more important than overall profit, such that if enough copies were selling at the reduced prices to equal (or improve upon) the amount I was earning before the experiment, I’d keep the lower prices.  Sadly, the rate of sales remained about the same at reduced prices as it was at my original pricing.

There’s another important reason, and it relates to some recent news from Smashwords.  Starting soon, all eligible eBooks available through Smashwords (all of mine should be eligible) will also be distributed through Barnes & Noble’s eBook channels (including fictionwise &c.).  This is great news, puts my books in front of even more potential readers, but it does come with an important caveat: sales through the B&N channels will be subject to the normal retail price cut that booksellers demand, so while Smashwords still pays authors 85% of revenue, for sales through the new channels, that’s probably 85% of 50% of list price.  Getting close to the kindle cut there, actually.

Finally, and this isn’t something I’ve already got the answers to, I’m thinking more and more lately about the idea of the value of a book.  Regardless of format & delivery method, whether it’s hardback, paperback, audio CDs, an MP3 CD, a PDF, or a .txt file – the thing in common between all of them is the book itself, the IP.  So, what’s the value of that IP?  What is the value of the book?  I’m not sure, and I’m not sure how a proper conception of the value of the book will alter the pricing landscape of the various editions and formats it’s made available in, but for right now I’m leaning in the direction of a “maintaining the value of the IP” position & I want people to know that the value of the book, the IP at the core of whichever format they’re buying, is more than $2.

So tomorrow I’m going to raise the prices of all my eBooks, on Smashwords and for the kindle, back to their full (1/2 paperback) original prices.  And soon I’m going to put together a video clarifying why I’ll always offer my books for free.